2018年1月6日雅思寫作范文解析

小作文

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地圖

題目

范文解析

解析:本題為地圖對比題。比較一個學校不同年份的布局。總體來說圖形信息并不復雜,設施的方位也比較好表達。考生在表述時,注意方位詞的準確運用,“坐落于” 或者“建造”的替換以及避免句型過于重復的現象。

范文

The map illustrates the different layouts of a school in 1985 and now.

In 1985, a car park was constructed in the north end of the school as well as a field was in the south area and they were connected by a road built in the central part. In the east side of this road, there was a two-story classroom block; in the west side, an office, a library and another car park were located.

At present, the school has changed a lot. The most noticeable is that trees are planted in the middle area and surrounded by two more classrooms, with the library replaced by a resource center and a computer room. Moreover, a part of field is cleared to make way for a pool and a fitness center. The car park north of the school remains but its size is smaller, surrounded by a wider road.

Overall, it can be seen that more facilities have been constructed in the school and the population has risen from 1500 to 2300.

范文原創自小站范鈺紅老師

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173 words

大作文

類型

社會類

題目

In many countries today, people buy a range of household goods ( television, microwave, oven and rick cookers) Is it a positive or negative development?

范文解析

解析:本題為社會生活與科技的交叉話題。問題是人們購買大量家電是積極或者消極發展。對于論點的拓展,考生應該不會存在很大的困難;但是論述時一定要利用題目中告知的一些家電品項來具體論述其帶來的生活品質提高的表現。

文章結構

paragraph 1 :結合時代背景引入話題且表明自己的觀點。

paragraph 2: 論述網絡購物的優點。(分為買家和賣家兩個層面)

paragraph 3: 論述網絡購物的缺點。(分為買家和實體商家兩個層面)

paragraph 4: 總結上文論點,強調自己的觀點以及如何避免缺點。

范文

In contemporary society, most families are capable to afford home appliances such as television, microwave, oven and so on. It is generally accepted that those technological goods have brought great convenience to our life although they do generate negative effects on environment.

In terms of merits of using domestic appliances, the most obvious is that people’s quality of life has been boosted. Take TV as an example; watching TV is a preferable means of relaxation for people to spend their leisure time and release stress, with amusing programs, entertainment news as well as soap operas shown on the screen. Another case is that the application of microwave, oven and rock cookers in the kitchen saves housewives from heavy housework and even assists them in cooking delicious meals efficiently. Furthermore, consumers’ demands for electric appliances stimulate the development of manufacturing industries, which creates more job opportunities and bring the government increasing tax revenue.

However, it must be admitted that the worldwide use of household appliances inevitably contributes to environmental degradation. To commence with, in an attempt to maintain these devices function, a great amount of electricity has to be consumed, which is largely generated from fossil fuels such as coal and petroleum. In the long run, the scarcity of natural resources will become a tough issue for human beings. In addition, harmful gas emission is another big concern. As a matter of fact, in the use of fridge and air conditions, Freon (a kind of chemical gas) is emitted into air, leading to the destruction of ozone layer.

In conclusion, as far as I am concerned, it is a positive development that people can purchase various electric appliances. However, environment-friendly technology should be adopted in its production to protect environment.

原創來自小站范鈺紅老師

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289 words